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Suppose the author wants to add the following sentence to the passage: Artists still record music and people still buy music, but not in traditional record stores as they did before. The sentence would fit most logically into:
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- 00:03
Okay as firing shmoop er's Here we go We're all
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over the place Suppose the author wants to add the
- 00:20
following sense to the passage artist Still record music and
- 00:23
people still buy music but not in traditional record stores
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as they did before All right this sense would fit
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- 00:29
most logically into which paragraph here where where would it
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go Well let's think about this okay so let's think
- 00:37
allowed here and you'll hear clanking noise We're thinking aloud
- 00:41
that for the new sentence is a great transition into
- 00:46
the information about how music is purchased or accessed by
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consumers these days So paragraph three leads off with a
- 00:53
statement that the days of buying an album in a
- 00:55
record store are long gone so it could use a
- 00:58
nice transition from the previous paragraph So well let's think
- 01:03
about this Probably going to be d here It should
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go in the beginning of paragraph three right there So
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it goes They then pay the musicians a small percentage
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of the wholesale price of each album sold Artists still
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record music and people still buy music but not in
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traditional record stores as they did four And then it
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goes to the days of going to the record store
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to buy him album are long gone Yeah that's pretty
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good transition there isn't it Yeah So it's got to
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be d and just check ourselves here from the loser
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bowl Well it wouldn't make sense Put sense in paragraph
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one Since the essay hasn't yet discussed the details of
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how the internet has revolutionized the music industry paragraph four
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discusses how the changes in the music industry effects artists
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not consumers Paragraph two presents information on how the music
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industry usedto work which would not flow well with the
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new sentence So yeah the answer is the beginning of 00:01:55.135 --> [endTime] paragraph three It's d and we're done
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