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CAHSEE ELA 4.4 Writing: Sentence Structure. What should replace the underlined portion of the following sentence, if anything?
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- 00:03
Buckle up -- it's question time... What should replace the underlined portion
- 00:08
of the following sentence, if anything?
- 00:10
Kyle really wanted to go skateboarding and was hoping that Joe would go with him.
- 00:14
And here are the potential answers:
- 00:20
It's all about AND. When does it need a comma?
Full Transcript
- 00:26
The first part of the sentence is INDEPENDENT. Kyle really wanted to go skateboarding. That's it.
- 00:31
It's an independent sentence. It can live on its own.
- 00:35
So if we mess around with the second part, we're going to have problems.
- 00:39
The "and was hoping that Joe would go with him" is a fragment -- it's a DEPENDENT clause.
- 00:45
In other words, it depends on the first part to ... connect it to the land of proper grammar.
- 00:51
So in this case A is wrong because this sentence doesn't need a comma -- the "and" joins it
- 00:56
without needing any noted separation.
- 00:59
Note that C is wrong because these evil testers left out the word "go" which would really
- 01:04
mess things up.
- 01:05
So the answer is D.
- 01:08
As in, "Don't need to do a thing."
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