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PSAT 1.11 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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- 00:00
Thank you We sneak And here's your shmoop do as
- 00:05
you were brought to you by con artists They're not
- 00:08
to be trusted if you catch our grip Are checking
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this passage Scamming nuns No limit how connor swindled On
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scampi in a minor people know shame like what All
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- 00:26
right well how would you change The bolo underlined portion
- 00:29
of the passage if it all in the brink and
- 00:32
here the pencil and on all right we've been hearing
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this word brink all our lives What is a brink
- 00:39
anyway We ever seen and bring Are there signs anywhere
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indicating when we're approaching one like on the highway Do
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bring skin a phone All right well the shortened sweet
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version a brink is simply the edge of an area
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of land right before there's a steep drop off In
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other words you really don't want to go over one
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unless you're an insane thrill seeker or have some kind
- 01:00
of death wish or at least a parachute depends on
- 01:02
the brink Now let's take a gander at the sentence
- 01:04
from the passage in which brink appears there's no limit
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to how low con artists will go the swindle victims
- 01:11
out of their money often targeting the elderly the terminally
- 01:14
ill homeowners in the brink of losing their homes Okay
- 01:18
well since we've already established what a brink is seems
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to be pretty diff a call to be in one
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in fact we're so clueless about how to even visualize
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such a thing that was going to show two seconds
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of blank screen and we're back So yeah no way
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this phrase is ok as is so we can eliminate
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option a but it the seat of the brake No
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they're not home Owners of the brink like the brink
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is some sort of ritzy homeowners associations of the is
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definitely out I haven't even about the ring about khun
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b used refer to something that is near something else
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but we're talking about homer's who are right on the
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edge of losing their homes on a safe viewing distance
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away from that break So the best answer here is
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be on the brink Those poor unsuspecting homeowners are right
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here in a ring on the edge of eviction gazing
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into the yawning abyss of homelessness Okay well we might
- 02:13
be on the brink of becoming a beat poet but
- 02:15
yeah we're gonna pull it back a scotch before things 00:02:18.083 --> [endTime] get ugly Whoa
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