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all right shmoopers moving on to question

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four of eleven here in this fine article

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about energy and materials and carbon

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fiber and stuff here we go...[person talking fast]

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paragraph focuses on large-scale

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manufacturing and recycling of advanced

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composite materials so it's not really

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geared toward the everyday American

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bringing up public outreach and

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education mid paragraph it's kind of [list of distractions appear]

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distracting right it distracts from the

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manufacturing focus here it's written

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for pros by pros in pros we do that's

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clever though the sense mentions the

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importance of recycling advanced

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composites a right there it's referring [woman sitting by campfire]

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to production not public service

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announcements about conservation and no

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smoking in don't like the forests on [smokey the bear appears]

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fire giving examples of what the

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Institute's up to is well and good but

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it doesn't fit right smack in the middle

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of a paragraph that's focused on

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manufacturing we all like eco-friendly

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materials but expanding on this sentence

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would make it more of an interruption

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well then it already is so the answer is

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D delete it because it well it kind of

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strays from the focus there so keep that [binoculars focus on smokey the bear]

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thing in focus

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