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ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 1. Does the underlined portion match the style?
ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 2. Which of the choices best matches the tone of the passage?
ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 3. Which choice best matches the formality of the sentence?
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ACT English: Passage Drill 3, Problem 4. Which choice describes the location of the subject correctly?
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- 00:03
Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by low pressure.
- 00:07
So, really, there’s nothing to worry about here.
- 00:26
How would you correct this underlined segment from the passage, if at all?
- 00:30
from overhead?
- 00:31
And here are the potential answers...
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- 00:36
This question requires us to know the location from which this spinning column of low-pressure
- 00:41
air is stirring up the water. Don’t worry; we don’t have to be Bill Nye the Science
- 00:45
guy to figure it out.
- 00:48
All we have to do is take a good look at the context in which the underlined portion appears.
- 00:54
For instance, choice (B) is ridiculous and insults our intelligence.
- 00:59
If the phrase “from above you” replaced the underlined portion, it would imply that
- 01:03
tornadic waterspouts tend to form directly over people.
- 01:06
Thankfully for swimming enthusiasts across the globe, this isn’t true.
- 01:10
Otherwise, there’d probably be legends of raining humans, instead of fish and frogs.
- 01:16
Choice (D) kinda gets across the right idea. Air pressure does come from above, because
- 01:20
it’s...like...air. However, there’s no need to qualify the statement with the fact
- 01:24
that it doesn’t come from below.
- 01:26
Even if we didn’t pay attention in Earth Science, most of us are pretty clear on the
- 01:29
fact that the sky is above the ocean.
- 01:31
Ultimately, (D) is too wordy, and there's no time for excess verbiage when it's raining frogs.
- 01:37
This narrows down the options to (A) and (C), which offer “overhead” and “up above,” respectively.
- 01:43
Out of the two, “overhead” is the best choice because it’s more specific.
- 01:47
“Up above” could mean anywhere higher in the sky,
- 01:51
while "overhead" indicates that the air is stirring directly above the water.
- 01:57
If it can rain fish and frogs, can it rain stinging jellyfish?
- 02:01
Let’s hope not.
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