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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 5, Problem 1. Which choice uses the correct tense?

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ACT English: Sentence Structure Drill 5, Problem 1. Which choice uses the correct tense?


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Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by verb tenses.

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Maybe they just need a Swedish massage.

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How should you change the underlined portion below, if at all?

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I woke up at 10:30 to find that my alarm has failed to go off.?

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Here are the potential answers...

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This speaker is a hot mess.

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Not only is she using the oldest excuse in the book for being late, she is also mixing verb tenses.

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The sentence starts out with the verb “woke,” which is in the simple past tense.

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This means that the other verbs in the sentence need to indicate that things happened in the past as well.

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However, “has failed” uses the auxiliary verb “has,” which places “has failed”

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in the present perfect tense.

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This is a little confusing because verbs in the present perfect tense do designate action

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that began in the past.

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But...and this is a big but...the action (or the effect of it) has to continue into the present.

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It’s called present perfect tense, so it has to have something to do with “now,” right?

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Since this slacker’s alarm isn’t currently going off, “has failed” is incorrect,

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and we can cross off choice (A).

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Choice (C) is even further off the mark than the original sentence. “Is failing” is

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in what’s called the “present progressive tense.”

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This is when a verb indicates action that’s happening right now and that may continue into the future.

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An example might be, “Because he overslept, he is running like crazy to get to work on time.”

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The present progressive tense is, of course, wrong in this sentence, however, because the

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past tense verb “woke” insists that the rest of the action in the sentence has to do with past.

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We’ve got another clunker on our hands with choice (D). “Having failed” is what’s

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known as a present perfect participle, and it isn’t called for in this sentence.

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A present perfect participle is used to describe an action that came before something that’s

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going on in the present.

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Here’s an example: “Having run all the way to work, he’s now dripping sweat.”

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Here, the present perfect participle does its job by clearly indicating that the marathon

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run to work caused the profuse sweating that this guy’s co-workers are now blessed to witness.

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In our original sentence, “woke” is in the past tense, so it and the present perfect

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participle “having failed” don’t get along.

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At long last, we’ve found the right answer with choice (B). “Had failed” is in the

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past perfect tense, which is used to describe an action that occurred before another event

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in the past.

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So our speaker woke up in the past…to find that the alarm had failed to go off when it

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was supposed to earlier in the morning. Makes sense right?

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Next time our speaker should come up with a more creative excuse for being late.

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What, there couldn’t have been a unicorn stampede?

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