ShmoopTube
Where Monty Python meets your 10th grade teacher.
Search Thousands of Shmoop Videos
Playlist CAHSEE Writing Test Prep: Writing Conventions 19 videos
CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Conventions. How would you correct the following sentence, if it needs correcting at all?
CAHSEE ELA 2.1 Writing Conventions 178 Views
Share It!
Description:
CAHSEE ELA 2.1 Writing Conventions. What is the most effective substitution for the underlined part of sentence 8?
More Video DetailsTranscript
- 00:00
Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour Brought to you
- 00:05
by the french nobility We say let them eat cake
- 00:09
Oh wait That's what Got him in trouble in the
- 00:11
first place No entry following passage on scarlet pimpernel You
- 00:19
think historical scholarship tuberculosis operation fans with you baroness who
Full Transcript
- 00:29
works here Is that the killer whale All right we're
- 00:33
done What is the most effective substitution for the underlined
- 00:37
part of sentence Eight and hear the potential answers Okay
- 00:44
so the powers that be at test central are telling
- 00:47
us that the word weird is just too weird for
- 00:50
this sentence to figure out the best replacement word We
- 00:53
need to know what the author is getting at with
- 00:55
this sentence If we re read the paragraph we can
- 00:59
quickly get an idea of where the author is heading
- 01:02
Basically it didn't seem totally crazy for the nineteen eighty
- 01:05
two film to show the dolphin being rescued because there
- 01:08
was debate as to whether the dolphin really died of
- 01:11
tuberculosis back in the day Some thought it was actually
- 01:14
possible that he was rescued and his captors made up
- 01:17
the tb story to cover up for their bad jail
- 01:20
keeping Skills we'll need to keep that in mind as
- 01:23
we're digging for the right answer Let's nix choice a
- 01:27
first of all word bizarre might sound a little more
- 01:30
fancy than weird but the two words mean pretty much
- 01:33
the same thing if the powers that be don't like
- 01:35
that one well they won't like this one either same
- 01:38
goes for option d strange bizarre weird They're all synonyms
- 01:42
and the powers that be aren't gonna go with us
- 01:44
on this one and it's best that we keep them
- 01:46
happy otherwise they might send in drones Answer c suggests
- 01:49
the word inaccurate which sort of fits unfortunately sort of
- 01:55
ain't good enough choice makes it sound like the rescue
- 01:58
was totally fictional with no connection in the real history
- 02:01
but we know that at the time some people did
- 02:03
still suspect this is dao fan could conceivably have been
- 02:06
rescued maybe not by a guy wearing a funny wig
- 02:09
but still you know the best answer is to be
- 02:12
the point here is that at the time the movie
- 02:14
was made it didn't seem quite as unhitch historical as
- 02:17
it does now you know because now there's a magic
- 02:20
of dna testing We know that the kid did die 00:02:23.663 --> [endTime] horribly of tuberculosis Viva la revolucion Yeah like that
Related Videos
CAHSEE ELA 1.1 Writing Strategies. Which of the following sentences, if placed before sentence 1, would be the most effective introductory sentence?
CAHSEE ELA 1.2 Writing Strategies. Which of the following statements is supported by details or evidence from the student's draft?
CAHSEE ELA 1.3 Writing Strategies. What is the best way to combine sentences 10 and 11?
CAHSEE ELA 1.4 Writing Strategies. Which sentence would provide additional support that fairy tales were not intended to be ideal worlds?
In this CAHSEE test question, figure out how to correct a section of the passage if any corrections are needed. CAHSEE ELA; Writing Strategies Dr...