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PSAT 1.1 Writing Diagnostic. How should the underlined portion be changed in the passage, if at all?
PSAT 1.10 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the below underlined portion of the passage, if at all?
PSAT 1.11 Writing Diagnostic. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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PSAT 1.22 Writing Diagnostic. Which choice results in the passage having the most appropriate concluding sentence?
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by snowy regions You can tell which ones are younger
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because they were there Ice caps backwards All right check
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out passage are forming or have a champion everyone for
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green but evidence to clear rising living in the planet's
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ocean Pleasure that's ending with the lords of the coming
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decades All right the writer wants a conclusion that encourages
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readers to address the problem of climate change which choice
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results in the passage having the most appropriate concluding sense
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and hear potential answers Okay before we start shouting and
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throwing produce let's take a deep breath and realize this
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is not a political debate this question isn't asking you
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to believe in global warming you're perfectly welcome to argue
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against it as much as you like all the way
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up until the waters of the atlantic ocean rise up
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and submerge you complete remember to pack your school year
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so you can still get your point across in a
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safe In the meantime all we're being asked to do
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here is choose the most fitting closing sentence for the
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passage the one that most aptly summarizes the writer's opinion
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We don't see any that feature a hilarious mike dropping
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punchline Sadly so we'll just have to go with whatever
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is the most relevant What option a fit the bill
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in fact sea level rise has accelerated in in recent
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years averaging a sixteen millimeters per year This may be
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true in the writer may very well agree with it
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but it just seems like he had another factor throw
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out there At this point he probably wants to focus
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on bringing everything together not rattling off more statistics so
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let's keep our options Open what about c for those
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in coastal states like california climate change could create big
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problems like droughts and wildfires Well again not really a
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summation of points Instead sounds like he's getting ready to
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fight off a whole new chunk of cheese if he
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were to end the paragraph this way he's liable to
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leave his readers with unanswered questions especially his review living
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in california who are suddenly feeling panic attacks coming on
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Okay then with the work clearly climate change will continue
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to be a hot button issue in both political and
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scientific circles for years to come Now that's a good
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conclusion but is it the right one Well yeah climate
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change is a big deal But why the talk about
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the political ramifications all of a sudden Up until this
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point it seems as if the writer is trying to
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drive home the importance of reversing these trans kind of
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like he's a dark robed figure pointing a bony finger
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at us and delivering some ominous warning Oh okay well
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we were thinking more like the grim reaper But the
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bathroom works to anyway presenting the idea that climate change
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is controversial Seems to come a bit out of nowhere
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so we'll keep looking Thank you very much Fortunately option
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b hits the spot Unless immediate action is taken to
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counter the effects of climate change it will likely create
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problems for society Well there's that ominous warning we were
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hoping for The writer starts by explaining all the terrible
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things that are happening to our planet and then turns
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it into a call to action advising us that we'd
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better get our butts in gear if we want to
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have any but left it all a few decades down
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the road Oh yeah we're going with the year isn't
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but okay yeah we're done You can resume your screaming
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now make sure you swim away from the dark oily 00:03:06.61 --> [endTime] patches
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