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Increasing its cooling caused by a lot Ok i see

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the remote for his last one in this writing section

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on all sci fi stuff Let's go find the paragraph

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here It was last sends Successful They will know exactly

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what you said at the electric lines without sacrificing point

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performance increasing its cooling cost by a lot All right

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people Well the essay isn't conversational One might even say

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it's ah a bit dry work which morning yeah of

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the choices listed the driest or most formal way to

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say ah lot is significantly as is the senses grammatically

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correct but the tone is suddenly ah lot or should

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we say significantly more conversational that's why a doesn't work

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you like comes out informally out of nowhere like your

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debutante ball and you smack someone on the back and

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tell a dirty joke right You don't do that well

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the word significantly gets the tone back on track but

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then supersizing brings the sentence right back to a conversational

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level that makes ah lot sound sophisticated Get rid of

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that like super sizing totally is the wrong tone plus

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totally can also mean completely which confuses the meaning of

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the whole sense How do you completely increase something it's

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like super unique We like totally don't know you know

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all right Finally we're done We'll see you in the 00:01:18.422 --> [endTime] next section we hope if you're away lo way

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